Wednesday, August 5, 2009

In Her Shadow

As I walked on the cold sand,
I recollected my memory.
I wanted more,
of the feelings that no one could see.

No one would really care,
if something happened to me.
So I wouldn't dare to share,
what's on my mind and heart.

I search myself for answers,
for the questions that fill my mind.
I search for answers,
so that I could be free-again.

I am trapped and I am lonely,
aching for something I couldn't be.
But then,I knew I could break away
if I could just get through one more day.

As I walk along the sea shore,
I observed a girl in front of me.
I felt like I had seen her before,
she seemed free and happy.

I finally caught up with her,
It was me.
She looked at me and smiled,
she told me to break free.

6 comments:

  1. WashingPowderNirmaInAccounts.August 5, 2009 at 11:28 AM

    Tasneem, you're an amazing writer. I feel embarassed to read your posts knowing you read mine.

    D':

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  2. WashingPowderNirmaInAccounts ???

    Dude,I absolutely love it. Especially the last paragraph. =]

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  3. Shut up,Anusha.Don't ever say that again.Cheesy as it may sound,your blog keeps me going.So don't be embarrassed.You don't have to.You're an exceptional writer.

    And thank you,Sahii:)

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  4. Tasneem... I love your writing. I really liked this piece... simple yet extra ordinary in its own way, like you !
    =)

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  5. Aww,Rayna thanks a lot=)
    Waiting for your blog to be updated!

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  6. wow! just wow!

    i love this one
    - nija

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